TR
Task Response
- The essay addresses both views but lacks depth in supporting arguments
- The opinion is stated but not well-developed.
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TASK 2May 20, 2026, 11:06 PM
5.5
Band
TR5.5CC5.5LR5.5GRA5.0
Section 01
Criteria Breakdown
Official IELTS Writing rubric scores with examiner-style feedback.
5.5
CC
Coherence & Cohesion
- The essay has basic structure but lacks clear progression and linkage between ideas.
LR
Lexical Resource
- Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some informal expressions.
GRA
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
- Frequent grammatical errors, especially in verb forms and agreement, reduce clarity.
Strategy
Improvement Strategy
Priority actions to raise your band on the next attempt.
The essay needs better coherence and cohesion, with clearer support for main ideas. Improve grammatical accuracy and use more varied vocabulary.
Section 02
Idea development
Depth of arguments by paragraph — what to add for stronger Task Response.
Depth2/5
The essay presents basic ideas but lacks depth and specific examples to support arguments.
Introduction
specificity
Main idea: Debate on job stability vs. frequent job changes.
- Provide a brief overview of the benefits and drawbacks of each approach.
Body 1
exampleimpact
Main idea: Stability in one organization offers high salary and position.
- Include a specific example of a person who benefited from staying in one company.
- Discuss the potential impact on career development and personal satisfaction.
Body 2
exampleimpact
Main idea: Changing jobs frequently provides more experience.
- Provide an example of someone who gained diverse skills through job changes.
- Explain how this experience can lead to better job opportunities.
Conclusion
specificity
Main idea: Changing jobs is more effective despite risks.
- Summarize the main points with a focus on long-term career benefits.
Section 03
Lexical upgrade
Weak Band 5–6 words from the essay → C1/C2 synonyms with example sentences.
CEFR vocabulary
7 upgrades from your essay
C1 · Band 7–8C2 · Band 8–9
B5–6better
C1Band 7–8more advantageouspreferable
C2Band 8–9superiormore beneficial
B5–6important
C1Band 7–8significantcrucial
C2Band 8–9paramountvital
B5–6think
C1Band 7–8believeconsider
C2Band 8–9deemregard
B5–6get
C1Band 7–8obtainacquire
C2Band 8–9attainsecure
B5–6good
C1Band 7–8favorableadvantageous
C2Band 8–9beneficialcommendable
B5–6useful
C1Band 7–8beneficialadvantageous
C2Band 8–9practicalvaluable
B5–6successful
C1Band 7–8prosperousthriving
C2Band 8–9accomplishedflourishing
Section 04
Linguistic Insights
Linking words, repetition alerts, and originality.
Linking words
Flow 2/9Found
whilehoweverfor examplealthoughin conclusion
Suggested additions
+ furthermore+ moreover+ consequently
Frequency alert
- “better”4×more advantageoussuperior
Section 05
Detailed Corrections
11 actionable fixes with explanations.
- 1Grammar
Correction
many people prefer
Why: Grammar Error: Subject-verb agreement error. 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'prefer'.
- 2Grammar
Correction
If a person works
Why: Grammar Error: Subject-verb agreement error. 'A person' is singular, so the verb should be 'works'.
- 3Grammar
Correction
if I had stayed
Why: Grammar Error: Incorrect conditional form. Use 'if I had stayed' for past hypothetical situations.
- 4Grammar
Correction
I would never have learned
Why: Grammar Error: Incorrect tense for past hypothetical situations. Use 'would never have learned'.
- 5Grammar
Correction
many experts say
Why: Grammar Error: Subject-verb agreement error. 'Experts' is plural, so the verb should be 'say'.
- 6Grammar
Correction
you meet different people and learn
Why: Grammar Error: Incorrect tense usage. Use simple present for habitual actions.
- 7Grammar
Correction
but it helps
Why: Grammar Error: Incorrect tense usage. Use simple present for general truths.
- 8Grammar
Correction
If someone changes
Why: Grammar Error: Subject-verb agreement error. 'Someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'changes'.
- 9Vocabulary
Correction
some people prefer stability
Why: Lexical Error: 'Prefer' is more precise than 'like' in this context.
- 10Vocabulary
Correction
personal growth
Why: Lexical Error: 'Growth' is the correct noun form in this context.
- 11Grammar
Correction
If people want
Why: Grammar Error: Subject-verb agreement error. 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'want'.
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