TA
Task Achievement
- The essay contains significant inaccuracies regarding the data categories
- The overview is incorrect, and the main features are not accurately reported.
STRATUM
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TASK 1Jun 02, 2026, 03:18 PM
5.0
Band
TA4.0CC5.0LR6.0GRA6.0
Section 01
Criteria Breakdown
Official IELTS Writing rubric scores with examiner-style feedback.
4.0
CC
Coherence & Cohesion
- The essay is logically structured, but the inaccuracies in data description affect coherence
- More accurate comparisons are needed.
LR
Lexical Resource
- Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision due to incorrect data references
- Some repetition is present.
GRA
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
- Grammar is generally correct, but errors in data description impact the overall accuracy.
Section 02
Task 1 Strategy
Structure, grouping, and quick fixes for Academic Task 1.
Body plan2 body
Recommended paragraph plan
IntroOverviewBody 1Body 2
Body 1
GroupingFocus: Higher expenditures
- →UK vs France in cars
- →UK vs France in books
Body 2
GroupingFocus: Lower expenditures
- →France vs UK in cameras
- →France vs UK in perfume
Quick fixes
- 1.Ensure categories match the chart.
- 2.Provide an accurate overview.
- 3.Avoid incorrect data references.
Strategy
Improvement Strategy
Priority actions to raise your band on the next attempt.
Focus on accurately describing the data presented in the chart. Ensure that the categories mentioned match those in the chart and provide a clear overview of the main trends.
Section 03
Lexical upgrade
Weak Band 5–6 words from the essay → C1/C2 synonyms with example sentences.
CEFR vocabulary
4 upgrades from your essay
C1 · Band 7–8C2 · Band 8–9
B5–6spending
C1Band 7–8expenditureoutlay
C2Band 8–9disbursementexpenditures
B5–6category
C1Band 7–8classificationgroup
C2Band 8–9segmentdivision
B5–6compared to
C1Band 7–8in comparison withrelative to
C2Band 8–9vis-à-visin relation to
B5–6notably
C1Band 7–8significantlyremarkably
C2Band 8–9conspicuouslyprominently
Section 04
Linguistic Insights
Linking words, repetition alerts, and originality.
Linking words
Flow 2/9Found
OverallIn terms ofSimilarlyNotably
Suggested additions
+ Furthermore+ Additionally+ Moreover
Frequency alert
- “expenditure”3×spendingoutlay
Section 05
Detailed Corrections
6 actionable fixes with explanations.
- 1Logic
Correction
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Why: Logic Error: The chart shows that France spent more on cars and cameras, contradicting the statement that the UK had higher expenditure across all categories.
- 2Logic
Correction
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Why: Logic Error: The chart does not have a category labeled 'leisure goods.'
- 3Logic
Original
UK consumers spent approximately £170, while their French counterparts spent around £90
CambridgeCorrection
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Why: Logic Error: These figures do not match any category in the chart.
- 4Logic
Correction
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Why: Logic Error: The chart does not include a 'food and drink' category.
- 5Logic
Correction
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Why: Logic Error: The chart does not include a 'clothing and footwear' category.
- 6Logic
Correction
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Why: Logic Error: The chart does not include a 'tobacco' category.
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